In-Class Essay 1

The military service record is the life-blood of a service member. It contains all information, confidential and open, from the start to finish of a military career. Its creation, upkeep and quality are the single most important reasons why I sit here typing this essay today. My service record, and the choices I make regarding its content, defines the accomplishments and pitfalls surrounding my adult life.

I was motivated to enlist in the United States Navy because I wanted to do something radically different with my life. I found the Navy’s nuclear field and upon entering boot camp a service record was born that will follow me for many years. This medium differs from many in that I do not have control of some of the things that enter and leave it. Performance evaluations, awards, and orders are a few examples of such texts. However, I choose on a daily basis to perform at the highest possible level. I choose to exceed the expectations of my superiors and to be willing to accept additional tasks. Some qualifications that are listed in my service record display my occupational interests. The detail and up-to-date status of my record indicate that I care about my job and desire to succeed.

In addition, the social group I joined is one of the most studied, documented and sought after groups in this country. The U.S. military steals headlines from almost every newspaper every day. I joined the largest fraternity and sorority in the United States. The service record is one thing that every military member has in common, regardless of branch, age or sex. The newest sailor in boot camp to the Chairman of the Joint Chiefs of Staff both has this record, though the latter is probably much thicker in bulk.

I view my membership to this fraternity much differently than the general public. The U.S. military and its members see themselves as employees of the federal government. Some are patriots, some need education, and some are just lost. All, however, go to work every day to do a job, much like everyone else. The service record tells the story of this job. Whether it is to fix planes, search for terrorists, or operate nuclear power plants, each member’s service record holds a priceless and unique tale.

Mine is a tale of training, dedication and success. I come to Purdue University with motivation that the average college student will not find for years. I have seen the importance of an education and the value of a great education. The choices I make here will not necessarily affect my service record today. However, in two short years I and my record will transform, and together we will start a new chapter. From enlisted man to commissioned officer, I will cherish my time as a college student through this process.